Voltman said:He use to carry his bat in a burlap sack
And visualise his innings on the rather flat track track.
Oh, the selectors used to see him sitting in the shade,
Playing to the rhythm that his little mind made.
People passing by would stop and say
Oh my that little Indian could play
Go Go
Go Dhoni Go
Go Go
Dhoni be good
Never fear, LE. It's not a competition.luckyeddie said:
I may just be losing my place
as CricketWeb's resident poet
If Voltman's ode is not luck
and he doesn't, you know, just blow it.
The true test, I think, is to come
when he has the seeds of an idea -
and instead of just singing a song,
he must choreograph the whole choir.
A good job - I'd have docked myself two marks for rhyming 'idea' and 'choir'. Don't know what on earth I was thinking of.Voltman said:Never fear, LE. It's not a competition.
LE, I'm fresh from from my A* in English GCSE, and I can tell you, that that was pathetic.luckyeddie said:
I may just be losing my place
as CricketWeb's resident poet
If Voltman's ode is not luck
and he doesn't, you know, just blow it.
The true test, I think, is to come
when he has the seeds of an idea -
and instead of just singing a song,
he must choreograph the whole choir.
Mr Mxyzptlk said:It's gone from "" to "Rob" with that comment alone.
Well, I must confess that it did take about 3 minutes out of my life.Armadillo said:LE, I'm fresh from from my A* in English GCSE, and I can tell you, that that was pathetic.
Au contraire, my journalist friend.Voltman said:The key to making things rhyme,
Is using the words at just the right time,
The sounds need to match at the end,
Or else your poem needs a quick mend.
OK, I think we should both quit while behind...
I think you should quit while you're aheadluckyeddie said:Au contraire, my journalist friend.
The key to making your verse rhyme
is to use this website all the time.
To ensure that you get it to scan,
just type out a long sentence and delete the words you don't need until you've succeeded in your plan.
Makes me want to post a poem I wrote in approx three min but I shant embarrass the elderly.luckyeddie said:Well, I must confess that it did take about 3 minutes out of my life.
Obviously.pug said:So what's the final comparison then?
Agarkar >>>>>>> Dhoni >>> Sachin > God?
LOL!Nnanden said:Dhoni could beat Pong IMO.
Big call though.
What's the site for that? I tried but I couldn't find itJono said:LOL!
I couldn't beat Pong on that internet site. He's too damn good.