Yeah stick it on youtube, get the opinions of the people. If you don't fancy broadcasting to the world feel free to
PM me.
Alternativley check this out:
http://www.earpsports.com/PubContent/Docs/Microsoft Word - occ coach video analysis bowler.pdf
This is closest thing I could find on the net that I use when coaching. I would say read the stuff below the table first to get an idea of what we look for both live and on video.
Once you have had a look at that, keep it in mind when you watch a video of yourself.
I do urge you however to not spend too long on this sheet as this is more detailed analysis than you need at your age, it's really to give you an idea of what to think about.
As it says on the document:
"bad advice or guess work is a waste of time." - Dont forget that neither I, or anyone on here know how you play or your action. There is no substitute for having a coach there with you to explain every point.
LF