New poem !

[C Boomer]

Check out my latest poem, 'the three amoebas ' ( some folk just can't stand getting beat )

Find it here @ http://www.cricketweb.net/forum/off-topic/72635-little-cricket-poetry-per-say.html#post3793886

 

[Fred Tetanus]

I'll be honest and say I couldn't stand it. Got to the third stanza before I had to stop reading to avoid any permanent damage. Keep trying though as practice makes perfect and you're coming from a very low base so should see improvement.

And FYI the words you're looking for are "per SE".

You're welcome.

 

[vic_orthdox]

Don't mind you posting the poems, but please don't go around advertising by creating new threads.